Sample Essays and Transcripts

The following essays and transcripts have been used with student permission. Names and some details have been changed for privacy purposes.

MBA essay with "standard" editing.
This is a real essay used for MBA admissions. Names have been changed for privacy. Includes original essay, edited essay, and notes on changes from the editor.
Website MBA essay.pdf
Adobe Acrobat Document 89.1 KB
IELTS Writing Sample
An example essay from a student who has completed an IELTS writing task, with error correction and a rewritten essay.
IELTS Writing Sample.pdf
Adobe Acrobat Document 58.3 KB
IELTS Speaking Test Transcript Sample
A real transcript of an IELTS practice interview with one of my students (2014).
IELTS Speaking Transcript Sample.pdf
Adobe Acrobat Document 103.4 KB